The Joyride Comments

Frivolity becomes you Mary; just as well as tragedy and pain

Beautiful, vivid imagery.

Mary...must be an American passtime. Here in Germany we never drive around looking at houses, but when we lived in Oregon we did it every weekend. I like the good solid images, and the rhymes are not strained, they seem natural. Good poem. It kept moving forward and I kept wanting to go along; I didn't have to struggle or force myself.

A fun poem, I was really digging the black birds and the cows.