Monday, May 25, 2009

The Joy You Have To Share Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love the way you take my hand and
Lead me through the lane,
It's amazing how you make me laugh
So don't fell the pain.
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Ishita Mehta
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Muhammad Ali 08 June 2009

very nice and pure expressions 10..

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Afzal Shauq 05 June 2009

a sweet poem.. emotional enough and iteresting one..love the idea and expressions...10+++++++++

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beautiful dedication to mom.............

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Alf Hutchison 02 June 2009

I would like to make a prediction right here and now....If you continue writing poems of this calibre and you are only 16 now...you are destined to be a great poet in the future. Ishita you have got what it takes don't ever lose it... Regards Alf...tell me when you have written again please.

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Saadat Tahir 02 June 2009

you have some very distiguished comments here... the phenomena of motherhood defies a definition in the conventional sense you did a very good poem i too wrote a poem on mothers day great cheers

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Delicate Heart 02 June 2009

the entire piece is fabulous, it touched my heart very much, especially the the four lines of the first stanza, vey tender poem.

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Subroto Chatterjee 02 June 2009

That is something which you'll carry down to your children as well....after the excellent 'training' from your mother... Very well expressed feelings..! Cheers. Subroto

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Joseph Poewhit 02 June 2009

Nice friendly poem in nature and feelings.

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Carol Gall 02 June 2009

love between mother and daughter is special good poem reflects that

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 June 2009

and still more to share you with, ., , its a joyful life that lovers can create through their love to make a creat one to last forever.. so beautiful my dear sweer girl.. hazem al..

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Eyan Desir 30 May 2009

Very good Well written Your mummy Could be proud hehe...... its a joke

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 30 May 2009

Mother's love is unconditional!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 May 2009

A good dedicational poem. Feelings about mothers are universal. Best Wishes Naseer

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Afzal Shauq 30 May 2009

a good thought with and perfect poetic flwo..and very inspiring one...thanks for comments and hope you do litle long to add to my new book....10 +++++

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Kesav Easwaran 30 May 2009

nice dedication there, Ishita...nicely rhyming lines...good piece...i liked...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

Yes, shared this joy, the lovely emotion.10+

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Afzal Shauq 28 May 2009

its enough emotional...and agreed with your logic you written..10++++

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Chitra - 27 May 2009

the unconditional love of the archangel well expressed

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 May 2009

You've always found the time to listen To my highs, lows and in betweens..........................mother`s love is the sweet of all, unequaled, eloquent flow of passion, yet ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 May 2009

There's no you without your mom.She's the joy and happiness but sometimes, sorrow.

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