I love the way you take my hand and
Lead me through the lane,
It's amazing how you make me laugh
So don't fell the pain.
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a sweet poem.. emotional enough and iteresting one..love the idea and expressions...10+++++++++
I would like to make a prediction right here and now....If you continue writing poems of this calibre and you are only 16 now...you are destined to be a great poet in the future. Ishita you have got what it takes don't ever lose it... Regards Alf...tell me when you have written again please.
you have some very distiguished comments here... the phenomena of motherhood defies a definition in the conventional sense you did a very good poem i too wrote a poem on mothers day great cheers
the entire piece is fabulous, it touched my heart very much, especially the the four lines of the first stanza, vey tender poem.
That is something which you'll carry down to your children as well....after the excellent 'training' from your mother... Very well expressed feelings..! Cheers. Subroto
love between mother and daughter is special good poem reflects that
and still more to share you with, ., , its a joyful life that lovers can create through their love to make a creat one to last forever.. so beautiful my dear sweer girl.. hazem al..
Very good Well written Your mummy Could be proud hehe...... its a joke
A good dedicational poem. Feelings about mothers are universal. Best Wishes Naseer
a good thought with and perfect poetic flwo..and very inspiring one...thanks for comments and hope you do litle long to add to my new book....10 +++++
nice dedication there, Ishita...nicely rhyming lines...good piece...i liked...10
its enough emotional...and agreed with your logic you written..10++++
You've always found the time to listen To my highs, lows and in betweens..........................mother`s love is the sweet of all, unequaled, eloquent flow of passion, yet ingenious by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing.
There's no you without your mom.She's the joy and happiness but sometimes, sorrow.
very nice and pure expressions 10..