Monday, July 16, 2012

The Joy Of Nits Comments

Rating: 5.0

Headlouse dance as agile ballerinas across a small childs skull
And believe the truth as im only good at that
I havent seen one for a while
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karen sinclair
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Chuck Audette 18 July 2012

Something to look forward to still with my little ones... Ugh.

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Heather Wilson 17 July 2012

Hope you will never have to go on safri again Karen, but it did sound as if you enjoyed the challenge. bet everyone is scratching as they enjoy reading your clever writing.

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Danny Draper 16 July 2012

I don't miss such scratching bliss of combing through for mop on top bits, but maybe just maybe in some oak and walnut hall where the skulls of threatened and extinct wildlife on plaques a sprawl, there is room for a trophy very, very small, with the head of a nit proud, protruding from it, and with engraved brass plate the inscription, 'Done in by Deeksie' proudly under it.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 July 2012

heart seems to confess what is when lost, ingenious write by imagery, amazing too

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Jon Terry 16 July 2012

only at the end Karen, funny piece I really like it. There I got another one! ! ! love it Jon

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