Friday, January 29, 2010

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The Joy of Life

Amongst the denst Wood
By the trees Grown near the stream
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Brian Caffrey 01 February 2010

Great poem loved the message at the end. Very powerful language at play here I was taken to a completely different world from my own (I live in Ireland it rains all the time) I haev never known a shortage of water but I deffinitely experienced it in that poem.

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Hussein Ahmed 29 January 2010

Amazing poem. I could visualise everything that it talks about, and the part in the middle where everything comes alive made me feel energized. Also, the message at the end is profound. Truly a lesson learned.

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