Wednesday, February 3, 2021

The Joy Chronicles (Part 3) Comments

Rating: 5.0

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I see.
I see a child smiling.
I see a child crying.
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Susan Williams
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Anjandev Roy 19 April 2021

Excellent write throughout...thank u.

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Rebecca Navarre 21 March 2021

So very, very heart moving! .. And so very, very beautiful! .. Ever such touching thoughts! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++

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Captain Cur 15 February 2021

A beautiful series you have written here Susan. I am heading to part 4.

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Kevin Patrick 08 February 2021

It is a joy for me to see another beautifully crafted poem that is a gift from your beautifully enrichening mind Susan! To see this world is a joy in itself. Love this work!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 February 2021

Another precious work! Liked the repeation of the penultimate line most! Top score! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2021

The opening lines grip the reader to go through with the whole write and the closure lines are just perfect to end a marvelous poem. To my Poem List. Loved reading it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 February 2021

A magnificent poem so beautifully crafted and conveyed. Very uplifting.

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Kostas Lagos 03 February 2021

A lyrical masterpiece! Five stars

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David Wood 03 February 2021

Susan, you have such faith!

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