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I see.
I see a child smiling.
I see a child crying.
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So very, very heart moving! .. And so very, very beautiful! .. Ever such touching thoughts! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++
A beautiful series you have written here Susan. I am heading to part 4.
It is a joy for me to see another beautifully crafted poem that is a gift from your beautifully enrichening mind Susan! To see this world is a joy in itself. Love this work!
Another precious work! Liked the repeation of the penultimate line most! Top score! !
The opening lines grip the reader to go through with the whole write and the closure lines are just perfect to end a marvelous poem. To my Poem List. Loved reading it.
A magnificent poem so beautifully crafted and conveyed. Very uplifting.
Excellent write throughout...thank u.