Tuesday, January 26, 2021

The Joy Chronicles (Part 1) Comments

Rating: 4.9

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I breathe.
The skies are dark and troubled
But I breathe.
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Susan Williams
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 September 2022

But I still breathe because God wants me to breathe....i respect this truthful expression.

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Rebecca Navarre 07 September 2022

As The/Our Lord has been with us all along! .......

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Rebecca Navarre 07 September 2022

Until one day we find the tears have stopped falling and so much beauty and love surrounds again! .. Beyond # S! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 September 2022

this poem caught my breath away Susan Bravo!

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Rebecca Navarre 07 September 2022

So very true, , , , , through the tears we must reflect on the blessings.. And count the precious moments of Gratitude too! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 21 March 2021

Very powerfully moving! .. Sorrow but Gratitude yet! .. An excellent poem of beautiful faith! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Captain Cur 15 February 2021

Each line breathes with pain but ends in joyful breath.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 January 2021

Great Poem giving praisals to God, indeed you and I breathe, because God gave us this gift of breath. Sublimest said!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 January 2021

This poem is powerfully worded by repeating I BREATHE. Such a poem full of brilliance, rereading this many times will give us strong mood, God is our company indeed! You count your Blessings passionately, dear Susan! 5 Stars!

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David Wood 27 January 2021

A wisdom poem, a little gem.

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Kostas Lagos 26 January 2021

God gave us the gift of life. Great poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 January 2021

I can predict, this series promises to be great series bearing wisdom. I breathe because God wants me to breathe... great. I would definitely read the series. I eagerly await for part-2

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Rini Shibu 26 January 2021

We breathe no matter what we face because God is with us to take care..beautiful poem

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