Bleak is this world with no bliss hovering:
The Second Coming, none spared from dreading;
This earth, so effete, no more can pillar
The spite making everyone a killer.
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I concur with the opinion of our good friend Bri! When people are busy with too many occupations and engrossed with challenges, they have not enough time or patience to open a dictionary and look for words! I feel your talent can be used for writing poems using words in common usage. Then they will appeal better to ordinary readers like us!
I am so happy to see you retun to PH and also follow my advice you lace you thesaurus as notes these old eyes and rotten brain now feel life has drained from the desires of becoming a celebrity now an entirely lost entity when i read your kind of poetry i question ppme are a hopeful celebrity blast thee thyself in the cauldrons of time yes says ppme no one shall read me as if it's the doings of DIVINE O PP you are just a meek me no celebrity Romantic born poet poet me yeps poet PLUME
the glossary is welcome, but my time is short and i won't take advantage of it. ; ( I'll take your word for the topic " love" . i read through quickly and it had too many words which are not in my vocabulary, and it didn't SEEM straightforward in its meaning; i certainly didn't " get it" . but other readers may well be impressed. good luck. bri :)
You are right....! In a rift ridden world, love is the panacea to all ills of mankind and it is heaven sent! Happy to see your return to poem hunter with your rocking poems.....!