Friday, September 8, 2017

The Journey Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

It is not easy for anyone
Neither for the moss nor for the trees
Neither for the birds nor for the bees
Neither for the worms nor for the geese
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Ruta Mohapatra
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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 September 2021

Each one tries to avoid the fall.... admirable expression. A brilliant poem about journey of life..5 stars

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 December 2018

Everyone has to undertake this journey of life alone, you're right, but a helping hand here, an encouraging nod there does help, as your last three lines say. Well said.

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Ruta Mohapatra 17 December 2018

Thank you for reading my poem and for the encouragement!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2017

Life’s journey is so fascinatingly expressed in a brief poem! I would love to quote, “It is not easy for anyone/neither for the moss nor for the trees/neither for the birds nor for the bees/neither for the worms nor for the geese”…………a very nice composition in subtle rhymes. I like your style of expression…thank you for sharing…..10

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Paul Reed 14 November 2017

Who knows when we will meet again... we are all equal in our struggle

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