The Journey Of Endless Destination Comments

Beautiful words of deep meaning. The sadness is deeply felt.

You may leave a couple of blank lines more before your explanation. There is a always a thrill to decipher a poem and check whether our view of understanding is correct. The key should be a little distant apart. Well! the poem is excellent. Vijay, You have also become immortal with your poems.

Vijay I think we all think it becomes too much sometimes but I don't think death is a better option - I used to but I've learned that life is the better option and I think one of the gifts we have as poets is to be able to do what you have done here; write out your feelings be they joy or frustration-Thank God for poets and poetry I know it's saved my life.

The pain and suffering encountered at the expense of the sudden demise of a beloved person is shown. It says that the success and fame of the departed soul is immortal great, the idea is unique......... keep up.

Fine tribute on immortality to make oneself free from envies and web of many worries in the world!