The Journey, Its Lesson Comments

i liked this one...! that was a wonderfully written..! ! great job ^_^

Woah strong poem,10 + well done for a good write

yes Easwaran sir, said it write..this is a great inspirational one indeed....hey i m sure you won't be the great Alexander the invader, but i m certain you can capture many hearts and be a beloved Alexender the great...nice piece brother regards/cheers shan

'i'm in a journey when its fatigue i have and no sleep because its revival i search for, i'm commited for it, and that i'll reap'... meaningful words... lot of revelation positivity and confidence reflect in those lines there...essential for life journey...good poem, Alen...thanks...10

what a wonderful message! : -)

Alen...You are THE most talented poet i've seen in a long long time.....you have put forth the general theme of life itself....and how the journey changes us........ you will go places my friend.... :) ....that's for sure.....one of the of the most true to the core life poems i've read in a while......... and you seem to be soo young....how on earth do you know soo much..? ? ....keep it up....you are a mature talented little gift........

wow alen that was wonderfully written...well done!

a long and wise journey in your so young travel..well done.. all i want now, is that others see their spring too, suffer less than i did, but reach their destination, along with learning the truths