Saturday, November 12, 2005

The Journey Is A Picture Comments

Rating: 4.2

The circle of your lantern patches snow.
Your face is weather beaten by wind's blow.
The safe moon is unreachable by air,
The fall of dark too eloquent to bear.
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Sandra Fowler
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Khairul Ahsan 20 July 2013

A befitting caption to a brilliant poem. The journey is a picture with no end. True!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 February 2009

The Journey Is (always) A Picture (of pleasure) , when the picture is imagefully penned by Sandra Fowler! F j R 2009

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Duncan Wyllie 04 August 2008

Alison has said this in her first line, the first word that comes to mind 'Gracious' Truely admirable Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 27 May 2008

There is such a graciousness in the style of your writing Sandra that is unmistakable and such a joy to read. This one shares the warmth of friendship with the snowy moonscape you describe with such eloquence. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 March 2008

the picture is the picture of never ending circle of life..........and beneath........was the path to wanting and rejection..........a beautiful craft.............

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Marci Made 08 July 2007

I think we all need company on this journey known as life and regret our many losses. This poem is touching and comforting and beyond lovely....how it ever was given under a 10 baffles me....for it deserves ten times ten and than some..Have to believe someone hit the wrong key and didn't check back.....thanks for this delight...........marci.xo

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Brian Dorn 28 November 2006

'The journey is a picture with no end.' An amazing line, Sandra... picture perfect! ! Brian

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 September 2006

FREE-FLOWING, IMAGE FILLED PIECE...Nice Write, Sandra! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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John Tiong Chunghoo 15 June 2006

sandra, i love the gentle subtlety that your poem always carries.

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Emma Johnson 08 March 2006

Your poem is 'too eloquent to bear'. Lovely.

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Joseph Daly 09 December 2005

Wonderful Sandra, Warmth does go a long way and your work seems to illustrate that

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 November 2005

It is true journey is a picture with no end at all. A true reflection of your inner thoughts on this life journey with no companionship.

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Mary Nagy 16 November 2005

A beautiful thought. Sincerely, mary

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Charles Chaim Wax 12 November 2005

a human touch on a desolate cheek what greater gift can we give a lovely poem

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