Thursday, June 19, 2008

The Journey Between Life And Death Comments

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When old age calls his name
He seems to give no blame.
When death says he's tall
He stopped to answer the call.
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Godspower Oshodin
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Eileen J. Hudson 04 August 2008

Wow. Thank you so much for sharing your prose with us. I really like this poem because it reminds me of an experience I had when I was a kid. I had died, and was going through the tunnel, and I almost reached the light, but my dad called me back. I hear a buzzing and then I was back home..... I think I shall write about it. But thank you so much for taking me on that journey. It was lovely and not really.

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Gwen Mathers 31 July 2008

very inspiring, i read all your poems, so far this one's my favorite.

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Melissa Coventry 24 July 2008

Good use of contrast of life and death and the journey between them, what comes from both and what we must accept. Mel xx

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