Tuesday, February 19, 2013

The Journey Comments

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he turned around so he could hide his tears
and decides not to tell her he dreamt about it for years

he tells her she should leave and go to her promised land
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paddy jansen
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Darkangel Flyfree 25 February 2013

It is a nice tale, enjoyed reading this, but is a bit jumpy and would love to read the full version of it! Overall I loved the story and would make great for a more detailed longer story or something! :)

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