Thursday, January 8, 2009

The Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Underneath the infinite sky,
above the ovoid earth,
anxiously,
he began his journey,
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Vaibhav Pandey
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Ritty Patnaik 15 August 2009

true knowledge is insatiable., the more you know, youwillfind there is much more to be known.for a true seeker, there is no limit......your poem is beautiful vaibhav and very inspiring.

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Yelena M. 29 April 2009

A pilgrimage of a seeking heart..A creation of a wandering soul pushing the limits of time.Thanks for sharing...Deserves more than 10. Best wishes. A.

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Pablo Cruise 11 March 2009

Poignant in its message. Polished in its delivery. Very beautiful, Vaibhav

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 January 2009

A sojourn of mind, and its' marriage to logic, aka: Natural Law.....in perpetual confluence with each other...as it should be. Lifes boundless queries, and the thoughts and possibilities that follow, are in essence a philosophical parallel to the concept behind the 'ad-infinitum' concept of numerics, space, and the ethereal plane hereafter....Excellent, thought gelling piece, my friend! F j R 2009

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Vernon Eaker 30 January 2009

Wonderfully versed, insight fully depicted, a clear 10

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 January 2009

This is a great poem about a basic philosophical truth. GW62

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Al Ramos 26 January 2009

I once took a journey around the world but when I stopped I was where I started.

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Tom Golding 26 January 2009

Thank you. This is another way of confirming my line. 'There is no end to growth Merely of desire to grow.'

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Alison Cassidy 25 January 2009

'...a new set of questions knocked at door, the door of insatiable mind.' I particularly enjoyed these lines, where you express your truth with economy and clarity. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Marilyn Lott 22 January 2009

An excellent way to describe the journey of life. Good job! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Eddie Roa 21 January 2009

Life is like that. The more you know the more you realize that there is so much that you don't know. Nice piec, keep on writing.

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~ Jon London ~ 20 January 2009

A true poet....and a wonderful journey of life.....A *gem* 10++ best wishes Jon

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Andrew Blakemore 19 January 2009

The journey of life very well described indeed. Well done, best wishes, Andrew

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Goran Gustafsson 19 January 2009

True, both for the induvidual and for mankind.

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Tia Maria 19 January 2009

Life's a journey... enjoy the ride :) Liked this a lot too - thanks for your comment, best wishes Tia

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Wonerful journey! May you never stop progressing.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 January 2009

A succinct, yet compedious philosophical offering...You open & close the piece powerfully...Your employment of crisp, tight structure affords your audience a mellifluous read...Solid Work, indeed! F j R 2009

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Meggie Gultiano 18 January 2009

this is great..A wonderful write, indeed

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Luis Alvarado 18 January 2009

This poem shows wisdom if one can look into the depths of the words, Truly Our journey never stops neither do the questions. Very nicely put. Continued success! !

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Catrina Heart 18 January 2009

A never ending queries and answers that is the cycle of an intelligent being who cares so much in this world...brilliance in composition.10/10

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