Underneath the infinite sky,
above the ovoid earth,
anxiously,
he began his journey,
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A pilgrimage of a seeking heart..A creation of a wandering soul pushing the limits of time.Thanks for sharing...Deserves more than 10. Best wishes. A.
Poignant in its message. Polished in its delivery. Very beautiful, Vaibhav
A sojourn of mind, and its' marriage to logic, aka: Natural Law.....in perpetual confluence with each other...as it should be. Lifes boundless queries, and the thoughts and possibilities that follow, are in essence a philosophical parallel to the concept behind the 'ad-infinitum' concept of numerics, space, and the ethereal plane hereafter....Excellent, thought gelling piece, my friend! F j R 2009
This is a great poem about a basic philosophical truth. GW62
I once took a journey around the world but when I stopped I was where I started.
Thank you. This is another way of confirming my line. 'There is no end to growth Merely of desire to grow.'
'...a new set of questions knocked at door, the door of insatiable mind.' I particularly enjoyed these lines, where you express your truth with economy and clarity. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
An excellent way to describe the journey of life. Good job! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn
Life is like that. The more you know the more you realize that there is so much that you don't know. Nice piec, keep on writing.
A true poet....and a wonderful journey of life.....A *gem* 10++ best wishes Jon
The journey of life very well described indeed. Well done, best wishes, Andrew
Life's a journey... enjoy the ride :) Liked this a lot too - thanks for your comment, best wishes Tia
Wonerful journey! May you never stop progressing.
A succinct, yet compedious philosophical offering...You open & close the piece powerfully...Your employment of crisp, tight structure affords your audience a mellifluous read...Solid Work, indeed! F j R 2009
This poem shows wisdom if one can look into the depths of the words, Truly Our journey never stops neither do the questions. Very nicely put. Continued success! !
A never ending queries and answers that is the cycle of an intelligent being who cares so much in this world...brilliance in composition.10/10
true knowledge is insatiable., the more you know, youwillfind there is much more to be known.for a true seeker, there is no limit......your poem is beautiful vaibhav and very inspiring.