Saturday, December 24, 2005

The Journey Comments

Rating: 3.3

Oh, I have walked this land before -
Have wandered through some hidden door,
Left footprints on a distant shore
Then traveled 'round the bend;
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Linda Ori
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Melt into my soul If wandering is what Fate has scribed for you You shall find destination And dereliction fused in one Melt into the concoction of my soul

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 June 2009

“When we shall wander back again, Neither knowing where or when, No matter where our souls have been - The journey has no end.....................” An outstanding poem with excellent ending. Idea/message is: never-ending journey of our souls. Brilliant composition,10+++

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Not a member No 4 25 January 2007

Exquisite hopeful sentiments of a journey never-ending. I hope you're right Linda! Another first class example of your superior poetic skills. You are a mistress of the Art. Do I remember you saying somewhere that you weren't a poet? I lead exhibits A, B, C and D m' lord, and my case rests. All rise: the defendant is found guilty of poesy in the first and highest degree. Punishment: To keep on writing work of this calibre through endless lifetimes. I hope I'm there to read the results.

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Alison Cassidy 31 August 2006

No end and no beginning either. We are but waves in the vast sea of life, each one making our little splash and returning to the deep blue mystery - over and over. Loved this one. Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Ray Forever 13 April 2006

Beautiful poem...written with such tenderness.10 from another wanderer! !

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kskdnj sajn 24 December 2005

This is beautiful Linda...enjoyed the journey reading... the faith, and spirituality strong. Thanks...Happy Holidays.

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