Friday, February 9, 2007

The Journey Comments

Rating: 4.8

They seemed to travel for hours
His arm firmly gripping her
Around the waist
As she sunk back into his warm body
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Impossible Princess
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Dee Daffodil 12 February 2007

Cool! ! ! Love the last line! Hugs, Dee

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Francesca Johnson 11 February 2007

Great ending, IP, not at all what I was expecting.......in fact, I found it absurdly humourous, like something from Monty Python. Oh, and welcome to PH... Love, Fran xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 February 2007

Must agree with Helen, oh Princess Impossible, or is that the Impossibility Princess...agggghhhh...ok, ..HEY, I. P.! (NOW, THAT DOESEN'T SOUND SO GOOD FOR ME TO BE SHOUTIN'! ') GOOD STUFF, THERE PRINCESS I.... FJR

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Original Unknown Girl 09 February 2007

Hmm.... I like a story without an ending.... can leave so much to interpretation. Interesting piece here IP - welcome to PH, you'll like it I'm sure! HG: -) xx

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