The Journey Comments

While the chariot wheeled him along the mazy paths, stretching, stretching endless to a world, beyond all galaxies, to the Elysian Fields- to a time immeasurable To abiding infinity To inconceivable eternity! ! ..... impressive concluding with thrilling expression. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing.

Let us hope the best by believing in the best.

Beautifully written Valsa. We all know that we are taking this journey. Clever my dear

We shall all eventually learn what awaits on the other side. If I get there before you do which is very likely, I will try to do what Houdini could not.. Yes, eternity is inconceivable. A thought invoking write

Professionally written. I like your style.

So many have taken this unique journey. Some pre-pondered it, while others were caught off guard. But it remains a journey for all living. The most important trip of one’s life. Happy journeying.

A lovely write indeed. You are a gifted poet. Keep it up

Ah mind! thou art sane but insane too. The'last journey' so meticulously envisaged by you has a touch of luxury and this piece of work would be worth a million praises if the destination of infinity and the eternity were indeed a reality. How great it would be if all the dead ones were to journey like this on the celestial chariot of a lifetime dream! Wonderful images ransacking the basements of reason and rationality. A fine world of everlasting illusion too!

Quite a write Valsa, reminds us all of where we are ultimately headed. A great poem.

A poignant poem so touching.

One day we will all take the journey. A fantastic poem.

Eternal journey to the unknown very well whetted.

the last journey.. time to move on.. lovely!