Tuesday, January 5, 2010

The Journey Comments

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Placed on the spiral metal
Looking at the above to a single point
Hearing the crickets make their nightly music
The occasional bat cuts my sight
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Andrew Lunel
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Nathan Martin 06 January 2010

hey your poems are good i think you have a stong sense of the world around you that means you should have a lot to write about, i am 30 i have been writing on and off for the last 10 years and it has been and is an evolving process, really it is finding your voice and being creative. having the courage to change or shift and feel, its medicine for tough guys. poetry helps me unharden and feel. just keep writing for yourself. keep it up nate

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