Wednesday, June 15, 2016

The Journey - 04 Comments

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I felt an urge-
Within me,
To touch her,
To interact with her
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 September 2016

To touch her! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear revered poet for such inspiring words.

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Anita Aparajita Das 22 June 2016

No more hindrances, None between us- Me and my mom, My mom and me, A heap of warmth, A lump of softness, A touch of love Culminated into A flux of nectar Into my existence, Beautiful description of milk feeding of a baby by the mother. Nice poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear Anita for such inspiring words.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 18 June 2016

Me and my mom, My mom and me, A heap of warmth, A lump of softness, A touch of love Culminated into A flux of nectar Into my existence, A stream of love, Care, comfort and relaxation Tethered into me Through my oral cavity. Great poem on mother and the birth of a baby. Thanks poet.10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you Sanjukta dear for such inspiring words.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 18 June 2016

The curtains between us Were removed. No more hindrances, None between us- Me and my mom, My mom and me, A heap of warmth, A lump of softness, A touch of love Culminated into A flux of nectar thanks for the nice poem.. Beautiful. well written. 10 marks for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 18 November 2017

Thank you dear mam Rini for such inspiring words.

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