The Journey - 02 Comments

Someone carried me! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

What a bliss! What a pleasure! ! I felt home. Beautiful poem. The more one reads it, the more pleasure it gives. Thanks poet for the sharing.

closer to my heart Were her bosoms- The home of sweetness and The sweetest nectar. I felt a comforting warmth, I needed most. It made me happy. It made me relaxed. I felt safe. Beautiful poem. Nice writing on mother's care. Thanks for sharing.10 for it.

My mother, the one With the softest grip. I was destined To a new and Thrilling experience. She drew me closer - closer to my heart Were her bosoms- The home of sweetness and The sweetest nectar. beautiful work.very nicely written. 10+ for the poem.

It made me happy. It made me relaxed. I felt safe. A sphere of caring comfort Encircled me and Engulfed around. What a bliss! What a pleasure! ! I felt home A great poem describing mother's comforting closeness. Thanks for the poem. 10 marks.

In the warmth of the mother, its heaven for any being. Thanks Subhas, for sharing.