The Journey - 01 Comments
It was a journey
Much awaited,
Much Needed,
Yet turbulent,
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They splashed Water on me- I felt hot. They rubbed me with cotton- I felt lonely. At last I tried To communicate To express my feelings. It was - Only a cry. Nicely described the birth of a new life, a real journey. Thanks for sharing it.
What a beautiful poem..10. By the way, , hank you Subhas for your comment on my poem, An Extraordinary Potter.
What a beautiful drop! ! The commencement of a great journey called life. One is yet unknown to the world of many surprises one has to go through and simply takes a first stride in the air to feel light and free. Great ink.10++++
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7/19/2025 9:26:03 PM # 1.0.0
They rubbed me with cotton- I felt lonely. At last I tried To communicate To express my feelings. It was - Only a cry. Wow, beautiful description of the birth of a divine child. Thanks for it.10++ for the nice poem. Seema
Thank you Rini dear for such inspiring words.