Monday, March 20, 2006

The Joining Comments

Rating: 5.0

With our fingers entwined,
We do not mind,
Where we might be,
Or who might see,
...
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Ernestine Northover
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Duncan Wyllie 06 April 2006

Hand in hand they stand.I love this one Ernestine, I almost feel as I am intruding on a personal moment, I feel like I should haved knocked first, Love Duncan

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Daniel Tyler 30 March 2006

As you superbly demonstrate, the best love poems are those stripped of pretension.

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Scarlett Treat 20 March 2006

E., You do run the full range of emotions when you write. From one poem about the chips on the table to this beautiful love poem....you are so very good. Scarlett

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***** ********* 20 March 2006

If this union of yours is gods plan Ernestine, then I think it is a very appropriate union indeed. I hope all is well with you and your dearly beloved other half. Beautiful poem 10 from Tai

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