Monday, June 10, 2013

The Jewel Of The Morn Comments

Rating: 5.0

When breeze teases water in the blush of dawn
Rises out of ripples on the heart of the pond
In the embrace of greens in frantic calm
She trembles awaits to be kissed by morn
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Yasmin Khan
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Farah Ilyas 16 June 2013

lovely display of the morning scene...outstanding poem of nature again from ur side poetess of nature....

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Sallam Yassin 12 June 2013

sweet sense of morn is that movie? Great shot well done

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David Wood 11 June 2013

A sweet haiku, I can picture the scene.

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Wahab Abdul 10 June 2013

very good one..very sweet and followed very beautifully.. loved it..

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Gajanan Mishra 10 June 2013

good love, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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