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An insightful creation

They say now that the basis of life in the form of essential carbon deposits could have fallen to earth as a meteorite, or comet, and that lightning strikes from banks of static delivered the spark that set life spinning. It's a beginning.....so the destination of world of life at stake; this poem as various aspects about the future life of the world.

Very interesting with rich, well-thought imagery. I liked this poem very much. Thanks for sharing it. Keep writing! I wondered, was this a personal experience?

Times! ! Those days! Death thrown in from above! ! ! With the muse of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

'The bird was crossing the gravel path in the style of a rowing boat crossing dry land' - loved the comparison.

With all the many comparisons, this poem has become a thought-provoking one! Absolutely marvelous!

Perfectly worded, powerful poem, captured well and a very sad ending of the three-letter bird. Thank you for sharing. Most deserving poem as the Modern Poem Of The Day. Hooray! I always enjoy poems of poet Simon Sir.CONGRATULATIONS being chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as TMPOTD.5 Stars Full Vote!

Absolutely amazing

Very thought provoking, no certain I’m on the same page as poet, there’s an urgency in the final, yet for me to fathom