The Jasmeen Tree And Devil's Hair Comments

I live this poem! In school we may have to present a poem about nature, and I might do this one! ! xx

She still stands tall in her turret bower Laughing in sunshine glowing in shower Necking birds and gemming flowers Swing on boughs for hearts a dower... wao poem on nature is beautifully drawn by you on the canvas of poetry.....hey is there any connection in between jasmine tree & you? or is it a symbolic poem?

Great write.May be some men can catch the glow and only they are beyond vision for many such malicious tresses to reckon- -every inch of tress has some story behind its darkness it plunges the mind into.Inquisitive write.Stupendous flow.

The jasmeen tree is so beautifully captured with great imagery and panache!

sweet that no power on earth that can stop the beauty to shine and spray out all the grace of good heart thanks Jasmeen

You are right it can be interpreted as a symbolic poem

an allegory nice poem well writ Jasmeen

But, this is an allegorical poem, I think. right?

This is one of the most beautiful poems I have read on a tree! (not flattering) The Jasmine tree with its exotically fragrant flowers is called Champa here. It may be strangled by wild creepers, but nothing can hide its perfume and the glaring whiteness of its flowers among dark emerald leaves! By seeing the spelling changed, I see a deeper implication to the poem. Is this JASMEEN that Jasmine, thriving among rivalry and jealousy? ?

Really, poems on nature attract us more. Loved.

I love poems about nature and I loved your poem. I have written much about bluebells and daffodils. Lovely write.

good write, laughing in sunshine glowing in shower, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.