Saturday, January 31, 2015

The Jars Comments

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Wine colored lips
& almond eyes with their lashes all furled
the picture of sophisticated calm
she's got her zebra scarf on
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Nika McGuin
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Daniel Brick 27 June 2015

I love that refrain - it's so atmospheric - and creepy. A sentinel totally absorbed by the space she guards and those mysterious jars! ! The second stanza is a litany of mistakes that can't be corrected. The situation is beyond hope. But the vocabulary and pacing make for a beautiful poem - ironic - it's the beauty of terror.

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