Tuesday, November 21, 2017

The Jar. Comments

Rating: 3.5

Quietly I hid the jar
Underneath some cool circulating air
Secretly, at a low shelf, no body notice
Seriously, please do not disturb
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Julia Luber 15 March 2019

I like poems about food. If these beans are for eating. Private, defensive, and universal sensibility of ownership and protection and polite control of one's own expressed. Great!

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