Friday, June 22, 2007

The Jailer's Key Comments

Rating: 4.9

The ring she wore about her finger
Was but a jailers key
For it bound her to a life of misery
The day she placed it there.
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Alison Smith
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Greenwolfe 1962 06 June 2008

I gave this a 9, but only for technical reasons. It is a special poem. GW62

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David Harris 01 July 2007

Alison, as someone once said it takes two to make a marriage work. Another person said you have to live with a person to really know what they are like. If you do that before you accept, then you know what your getting into. It is then the Jailer's key doesn't apply. Great poem. Top Marks. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Alison Cassidy 22 June 2007

The Jailor's Key is certainly an excellent metaphor for entrapment in an unsatisfying marriage. I suspect this poem might be based on personal experience - it certainly rings with a particular kind of truth. And you're right, of course. It's often the carrot of security that wins over the wings of freedom. Thought provoking piece. Well worth reading. Love, Allie xxxxx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 June 2007

A sad view on marriage Alison, but you have to meet the right one, it takes two to make a marriage work, and should not be rushed into...10

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 22 June 2007

Nice. I like the 'image'. Alison...marriage is a great institution! However, I must admit, when I was 'paroled' many years ago...I have not committed that crime again! I've gone through a rehabilitation that has cured those temptations. Good write. L

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