Sunday, October 19, 2008

The Jackdaws Are Calling Comments

Rating: 5.0

The jackdaws are calling from out of the woodland
They lurk in the branches there hidden from sight,
While scanning the ground where the food now is scattered
Yet covered they rest in the shade of the night,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Tsira Goge 02 November 2008

They then fly away in the skies far above me Then soar to the clouds as they sail on the wing, They travel like gypsies away on their journey....... ............................................................. ANDREW, Very interesting and poems, it is beautifully written. 10 for my... Tsira

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Ernestine Northover 28 October 2008

How I remember these birds from my childhood, we lived in the countryside with fields all around us and the jackdaws were everywhere. Fascinating creatures. This poem has captured them in every detail so well. Excellent observations. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 19 October 2008

This is very good Andrew, i don' think there's a person place or thing that you can't write a wonderful picture perfect poem of! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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