Tuesday, March 28, 2017

The Italian Cross [итальянский Крест] By Mikhail Arkadyevich Svetlov (1903 - 1964) Comments

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A ‘translation' by Keith Johnson

There was a black cross on his chest
No engraving, no design, no patina:
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Keith Shorrocks Johnson
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Arseniy 23 May 2018

I'm sorry, but this translation is extremly incorrect and changes the original meaning of the whole verses. For example, in the second verse the hero asks the Italian what does the boy from the Neapol need in the Russian steppes. One of the most iconic phrases from this poem was also translated incorrectly: it should be I shoot and there is no justice that is more just than my bullet.

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