Thursday, September 5, 2013

The Islands Comments

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The corals on the sea bed,
Colorful, but visible as the shades,
The ups and downs of the stuff,
Not man made, but created,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Savita Tyagi 07 September 2013

The quick sand under the feet of cloudy thoughts! Veeraiyah! your imagination is great and portrayal is vivid.

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Niamat Ali Murtazai 07 September 2013

A ravishing romantic poem with wonderful compounds like silvery falls, cloudy thoughts, plastic boats.

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