Thursday, April 10, 2014

The Islander Comments

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A chance acquaintance on that island bus
said he was eighty of age
have fled for some years the city's rush
on the island have rented a cottage.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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David Mclansky 12 April 2014

You paint a complete picture with a few deft, masterful strokes. I could smell the bus diesel, feel the swaying of the bus as this old man imparted his simple wisdom to you. Bravo!

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