Monday, January 7, 2013

The Island Comments

Rating: 4.2

The island stands alone in virgin silence
Its rugged vistas pleasing to the eye
Its ocean girdled slopes untouched by violence
Sleep peacefully beneath an azure sky
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Thomas Donnelly
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Sigurdur Gislason 17 August 2013

wery good any wich way. Strong visual image woven with words, that also holds deeper meaning. A pleasure to read

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Guy Lip-more 07 January 2013

I also think it is pretty good, my first attempt couldn't contend with your first line!

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Gajanan Mishra 07 January 2013

Really very good poem. The years send empires plunging. thanks dear poet. I invite you to rad my poems and comment.

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