Thursday, January 29, 2009

The Island Comments

Rating: 5.0

All Mankind on a drifting boat
Chasing day by day for a view of earth
They realize as never before,
They could not reach it anymore
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allan macli borges
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 10 February 2009

adventurous and awesome! keep writing!

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ata khan 08 February 2009

Beautiful imagery, great poem. Thanks for sharing

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Catrina Heart 05 February 2009

Brilliance in composition Allan...you have painted a nice imagery in a free verse composition...nice theme about humanity...10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

But some were livin without ever seen or touchin the sea.

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allan macli borges

allan macli borges

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