Saturday, January 4, 2014

The Irony We Count On... Comments

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The burning Sun buries himself inside a black blanket
The planets have all been burnt up already
And the galloping asteroids get stranded in the milky way.
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 January 2014

Burning sun and sulking moon taking turns Love and hate entwined Memoirs of mother and wilderness of unknown parentage Wagging tail and tail-less state Weak to take a bite and biting a hard nut Contrasting states in the two parts making it a unique poem. Nice example. Thank you.

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Rubab Atwal 06 January 2014

How true every cloud has a silver lining it just depends on how we see.an amazing poem with buckets of inspiration....

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Shahzia Batool 05 January 2014

This write up is marked for the use of alliteration and assonance along with their effect!

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