The burning Sun buries himself inside a black blanket
The planets have all been burnt up already
And the galloping asteroids get stranded in the milky way.
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How true every cloud has a silver lining it just depends on how we see.an amazing poem with buckets of inspiration....
This write up is marked for the use of alliteration and assonance along with their effect!
Burning sun and sulking moon taking turns Love and hate entwined Memoirs of mother and wilderness of unknown parentage Wagging tail and tail-less state Weak to take a bite and biting a hard nut Contrasting states in the two parts making it a unique poem. Nice example. Thank you.