The Inward Outward Sights Comments
Of late, I have quit
Telling stories to
My niece's daughter Tit;
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A delightful little light-hearted poem Kesav....you have a talent for writing these as well...Like everyone else I too would like to know how you answered your clever little niece...10++++
A lovely heart-warming story Kesav, a pleasure to read. Best wishes, Andrew
Such a lovely poem that makes us wonder as we read it... thanks for sharing it ya... =]
really nice poem of explaining to the young girl of blind men story, it will be really great to read if you write a next poem of what answer you gave the child... really very curious to know...
Wow Mr Kesav... The famous story of blind men and an elephant... The question little girl asked is very profound and beyond our five senses... The imagination one creates without using five senses expalins the vision of a true poet and you have got that one Sir... Great work of art...
Nice poem. Good theme and message, conveyed in a good style. Children are innocent and sharp. Childlike intelligence has purity which is so touchy! ! ! Vanita
nice story, and nice rhyme.Guess, i want more of this.This is cute!
child is the father of man, you learn and unlearn a lot when they ask questions which defy all logic. they spin yarns which competely captivate as you have with this lovely poem. full of wisdom. 10 Mamta
You have captured a touching moment in time Kesav, and immortalized if. You mirrored the enlightment of a childs' innocent question beautifully. Thank you for sharing :)
WOW! nice story! Innocent children live in innocent world where truth and beauty exist. so their behaviour astonish us. 10+
Kids are very clever n smart these days.. we cannot fool them as they know the truth n also want to hear the Truth only... :)
After many days i read an impressive poem sir good one interesting to read
Charming questions from innocence of children, they also have the memonry of an elephant so beware....well written
Children are amazing. In Australia we used to have a magazine that quotes children's replies to what we think makes sense. Your poem is priceless Kesav! 10 Karin Anderson
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8/10/2025 1:09:04 AM # 1.0.0
'The girl bites the humourist'..... kid's question reminds me the story.. the first stanza did in wonderful rhyme.. the rest much thought provoking... kids in turn ourturn with powerful punches, though innocently, philosophical. the man with full sense (claim) and built fit would visualize things in wrong perspectives......... like explain god (not exist) in multitudes........ thanks for sharing a nice poem. rgrds/salu