Monday, September 5, 2016

The Invisible Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am the invisible man,
Wandering about with no purpose or plan,
Unspoken to, unnoticed, and never quite seen,
I walk the edges of reality like a vivid dream,
...
Read full text

Daniel Pace
COMMENTS
Annette Aitken 08 September 2016

Yet another great write...so glad Judith pointed me in your direction.....I have one called Can't you see me sitting here a guy that nobody see's. Annette

0 0 Reply
Tom Billsborough 07 September 2016

Yes, some people do seem invisible. It's up to us to make them more visible by touch. A very interesting poem, Daniel.

0 0 Reply
Daniel Pace

Daniel Pace

Salt Lake City, Utah
Close
Error Success