Friday, August 14, 2020

The Invisible Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

Well defined boundary
Circumference our existence
Yet we never feel bound.
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Varsha M
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2020

We breath more! ! ! ! Living; Enjoying the fruits of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 14 August 2020

Breeze is often the best peer........wonderful write.....thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Sharad Bhatia 14 August 2020

This is a wonderful poem about the " invisible air" . Really appreciable. Many - many thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. Rated 10000++. Regards..! ! ! सुना तू हवा हैं, साथ - साथ चलती हैं, मेरे।। तेरे इस एहसास को स्पर्श करना चाहता हूँ, तुझे एक बार गले लगाना चाहता हूँ ।। जानता हूँ, तू दिखती नहीं, फिर भी तेरे आगोश मे सिमटना चाहता हूँ ऐ हवा, तुझसे मोहब्बत करना चाहता हूँ।।

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