The Intense Caligraphy Of The Human Voice Comments

Oh I just adore this...this is tender and sexy in equal amounts and what any girl wants. I'm jealous of the woman in this poem. And the end bit of the 'pen' & 'paper' falling asleep is just divine. What I wouldn't give to be your bit of paper - you could write on me anytime. This poem made me feel like...like... oh I can't tell you! love Dee Dee

I love the thought of words falling into a belly button, just as I love the sheer joy of this poem, the love that shines out of it...until, at last 'both pen and paper' fall asleep.