The Intelligence In The Mind.... Comments

Your last stanza is worthy of remembrance.Beautifully defined.

Contd...Really explorative piece. Your closing line is the insightful insight. That says intelligence of the mind and intelligent minds are two different things. Good rumbling Sylvia.

Intelligence in mind is complex indeed but that keeps going on without stop. Thinking what will happen nexr day while eyes say sleep sleep. How to sleep when intelligence of mind is at Work....contd..

about paradox and paradigms or about science, wisdom with such enthusiasm know where to read the poems you get that audience.. Intelligence in the mind. a fine theme. tony

A full score for the 'Intelligence in the mind'.......10 Thank you so much, dear Sylvia, for sharing this poem with us. Remain blessed.

I enjoyed reading the reviews of our Master Poet Kumarmani ji. He has beautifully explained what 'Dil" is. I loved the story of lion and the crow.

My dear Poetess Sylvia, so happy to read this poem. You have made it very clear: " I'm talking about the intelligence in the mind and not about the intelligent mind...." The mind, the heart and the intellect are different organs with specific functions. The pattern in which they behave and function is very well analysed in this poem.

This poem is an essay! Loved it! An intelligent poem(I made a pun)

Greatest polite view is well expressed and I admire your effortless quality of presentation. An excellent opportunity this creates for reviewing this poem. Thank you very much sharing this your lovely gem. Let this poem bring more fame for you. The last stanza is super and duper stanza. " I'm talking about the intelligence in the mind and not about the intelligent mind...."

This poem needs special attention to read more and narrate more in review. This requires a brief review. However I have reviewed this in shortest possible way due to lack of time. Many stories come into mind through scriptural study but time is short to represent all of these. Just we are stopping now in the paradigm. We have more hopes to establish in reality.

Mind of a poet goes with heart and whole system of life. Through intelligence everything in nature is perceived. A cleaver poet like you have definitely intelligence and you are intelligent too. Formulating an episode for a class reflects power of intelligence. It impacts deeply to the students. You are very nice teacher. Tomorrow you have lectures and we hope you will brilliantly teach the students God's blessings is there with you and all.

Dil (In Hindi Dil means Heart) beats continuously as Lub-Dub, Lub-Dub, but due to autonomous nervous system it beats. But Dil is not Mind. There is intelligence in mind. But in Heart or Dil there is no intelligence although it functions freely due to autonomy. This is mind who commends over heart. But heart is intelligent without intelligence within. Mind thinks and generates beautiful poems. Heart sings with mind. When mind sings song for God, heart repeats with pleasure.

A crow, who flies above in sky often defames Lion seeing downward but it does not bother at all to Lion. Crow is no doubt intelligent but negatively intelligent. But Lion has intelligence in mind and there is huge difference among them two. Lion has more positive Intelligent Quiescent (IQ) than crow. This poem is very exceptional and this reflects your inner power of observation. After reading this poem I have remembered Crow and Lion story.

But crow roars that he is Dil (in Hindi Dil means Heart) of many creatures or people but it is not true. Then he says that he has Knowledge of superior quality and he is in SWearing-in ceremony and soon he will be declared as King. But silently Lion walks without seeing up above the tree on witch on top crow has occupied the seat. Whether on top or at last on ground, Lion knows that he is only the mighty king of the forest. Lion has positive intelligence in mind.

Sometimes a negatively intelligent and clever crow may think that he is the king of forest and he may declare the same. But lion may not roar or may not go into a swearing-in-ceremony as he has intelligence in mind and he knows that by his power he has become king of forest in own style and he needs no special declaration.

We are not worried much. We should be careful towards negatively intelligent person and we should go on writing and reading without any fear. We are not worried at all if anyone threatens us. May God forgive such a person of negative mentality. We are the poets having intelligence in mind with positive perspectives and trust on God. Our intelligence comes out of peace and generates peaceful thoughts.

Motivating mind by grace of greatest fortune builder, our God is definitely very nice and interesting. We proceed ahead with much care and responsibilities. Consciousness makes us better to live and grow. Intelligence should be positive and pure it should be devoted to God. Any work done in memory of God is definitely great. We need to read this poem several times.

Famous scientists remain in history due to their memorable works. Your intelligence makes you a great scientific poetess and we feel this from your performance and rising continuously. So many poems are product of mind's intelligence. Intelligent mind is something different than intelligence in mind. Your poem is specific and scientific. Poems do magic as poems are magical flow of thoughts from mind. An excellent poem is well penned.10