Saturday, November 14, 2015

The Inspiring Maiden Of The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thou the inspiring maiden of the sky,
Wash thy dale with thine silvery rays,
As thou fade when dawns daunting eye;
Shines at ease over the full sway.
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Debashish Sarkar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2015

Thrilling expression. A marvellous poem with fantastic collocation. Thanks for sharing....10

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Debashish Sarkar 14 November 2015

Thanks for reading Mr.Ratnakar

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Ratnakar Mandlik 14 November 2015

The inquisitive bard faces a lot of questions akin to God, love, nature and seasons and his desire to get answers to them is partially fulfilled, thus, leaving him in distress. Very enjoyable rhyme and meaning of the melodious poem. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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