Friday, February 19, 2010

The Inside Comments

Rating: 5.0

You put me down so far underground
Like a plush rabbit without his crown:
Sister, sister, you put me down:
My entire family put me down; I am the black sheep
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Robert Rorabeck
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Kerry O'Connor 20 February 2010

You have such a light touch; the reader cannot but become part of your world. Truly beautiful, Rob.

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Akice Yimasaru 19 February 2010

asome.. Your poem is beautiful. I love the way you make it sound sad and nostalgic. The lines of your poem all show and transform the feelindg into a image. It´s really beautifull congratulations¡

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Robert Rorabeck

Robert Rorabeck

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