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I split myself and found a sky within--
Deep and solitary; a canopy under my skin,
The fragments of moon pierced me sharp
And a feeble tale of life, i found to spin;
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Beautiful...A perfect poem indeed.....I can see a perfect poetess within.....10/10. I would like to translate it in Urdu.
Good! Good! Good! It is a superb poem. Keep it up...! ! !
WOW! ! ! >...wot a poem....ITS SUPERB! ! ! >....very different thinking...has all essence of a poetry...ur GR8! ! ! >.....found a different touch of imagery in ur poem...liked it much....i give u 10...KEEP WRITING! ! ! >>>..good luck! ! .. pls read ma poems and comment on them..! ! ! am just a starter to writing field...help me...thanks for sharing...bye.! !
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7/25/2025 11:24:29 AM # 1.0.0
A good start with a nice poem, Sue. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.