The Insane Gloom Comments

I think oh star but you knew the truth Soon dwan will arrive to stop their breath. It will destroy insame gloom with a smile Not affecting oh star your twinkling.....so touching and impressive expression. This is a beautiful poem so nicely delineated.

On shy damsels cheek. Thanks for sharing.

As the sun sets, gloom spreads. but even in the gloom, there is a twinkling star. The comparison of the star to the dimple that appears on a damsel's cheeks is lovely. Though I didn't fully comprehend the inner meaning of the poem, it is altogether Beautiful!