The Innocent People Comments

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 7 hours ago · Unlike · 1

.....great sarcasm represented through effective use of words......innocent ones should be respected....they are modest not weak....lovely work sir

Love it katelyn.4 minutes ago It's an interesting topics and everything mentioned, I argreed Comment +1

Very good Xtian Oliva5 minutes ago Very good Comment +1

Okay Alena Leonova4 minutes ago It's a good start, and obviously you have a clear message and purpose here. I don't really specialize in social issue poems, so I may be really off my mark here, but I felt you didn't evoke many strong emotions & perhaps you could use some more figures of speech here.

We love innocent people As they always try to avoid trouble