Sunday, May 19, 2013

The Innocent Few Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cry for the victims
cry for the families
they are stranded in the shadows
they are hidden by the dark
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heather Wilkins 11 July 2013

the innocent one suffer because they are innocent. the guilty have the smarts. agreed

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Ckim Mbasa 10 July 2013

poem of affection. Thanks for the writings. i like it.

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Christina Chisolm 07 July 2013

This poem is amazing

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Vipins Puthooran 23 June 2013

In the eyes of the innocent lies the story of the truth//// Truthful line: : : : : : : 10+++

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Autumn Winds 02 June 2013

Tell their stories, so that others may know. This has a deep meaning in short lines -A

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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 May 2013

I enjoyed the metre of this piece.

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Good poem written for the innocents, imprisoned..

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R.j. Wynn 22 May 2013

Great write Dave, and the meaning is universal.

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David Wood 20 May 2013

Why is it that its always the innocents who suffer, who don't have the strength to fight back. Good poem Dave

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Valerie Dohren 19 May 2013

It's always the innocent who suffer it seems - great poem Dave.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 May 2013

Listen the soul and see the truth. good write, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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Dave Alan Walker

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