Monday, July 11, 2011

The Innocent Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The sound of the unwanted rang through the streets
The wind spikes its thin yellowish skin
The hardness of the new world
graps it's fragility bits by bits
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Lariel Morihsta
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 July 2011

Marvellous poem written with great skill. Rich in imagery and emotions. I liked and rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'ABORTION' on page 4.

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Lariel Morihsta

Lariel Morihsta

Malaysia
Lariel Morihsta
Lariel Morihsta
Malaysia
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