Tuesday, July 9, 2013

The Innocence Of Waiting.. Comments

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How many days and nights,
I have stood on a leg,
On the brim of your thought,
To knock the tightly closed,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Savita Tyagi 10 July 2013

Marvelous poem. Life teaches a lesson when we loose innocence and eventually learn to cope with it. You have expressed an emotion beautifully.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 July 2013

In between the shadow.. good write, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 July 2013

satire laden words point to the futility of idle worship, nicely crafted

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Jenie Franksay 09 July 2013

I Love the title as well as the poem. good write ma'am. read my poems & comment. thanks.

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