Tuesday, October 27, 2015

The Innocence Of Being A Child Comments

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I stare @people who come and go...
Seeing me they smile so much, feel so happy little about their Plastic Smile i know.
With my round bubbly eyes i keep staring @them..
Few aunties play with me, few uncles feel joy while in the air they throw me...
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2017

happy little about their Plastic Smile Few aunties play with me, few uncles feel joy whil e in the air they throw me. In little toys lies my BIG WORLD, A few jealous eyes, a few plastic smiles a few people unnecessarily commenting I miss that Innocence of being YOU my child... winning over the HEART, I know i can never have that INNOCENCE back... You the child grew into this world and lost that innocence and innocent joys. Wonderful reality of life you have expressed in great imagination.. make use of this power of i magination to write and present great poems which make the readers think with you. Thank y ou dear poet. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 January 2016

But to learn with the works of righteousness. Nice work.

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Rishi Thakkar 10 January 2016

Thank u so much :)

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Rishi Thakkar 10 January 2016

Thank you so much

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Abhilasha Bhatt 09 January 2016

A well narrated and innocent and wonderfully expressed poem rishi..thanx for sharing :)

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Rishi Thakkar 10 January 2016

Thanks abhilasha :) Its a pleasure observing a new born

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