Saturday, May 31, 2008

The Inner Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

In every star
A cute sunflower lives
We can't see her
Except the light she gives
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Sarah Atieno 14 November 2008

This is luvly. I'm amazed don't know what to say but give you a 10.

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Carol Rhodes 10 November 2008

ANOTHER BEAUTY. YOUR THOUGHTS/IMPRESSION ARE MINE AND MINE YOURS. I CALL SMILES AND HUGS MEDICINES. FOR THOSE LUCKY ENOUGH TO MEET PEOPLE WHOSE EYES SHINE FIRST BEFORE THEIR LIPS, WELL, WE ARE BEING TREATED TO A TRUE CONNECTION AND COMPLETION OF OURSELVES AND THEM. PURE MAGIC. CAROL

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Tsira Goge 07 October 2008

Nightingale, beautiful and surprising poems, you fantastically whistle my friend... 10... Tsira

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Paul Hamer 11 June 2008

And flowers of beauty rose above the reeds: the winds of change scattering their seeds.

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... ... 09 June 2008

Awwww, is a very pretty poem! ! ! It really speaks to me. Bravo, my nightingale!

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Kesav Easwaran 07 June 2008

This poem is a star la sunflower…beautiful imaginative and thought provoking. One of the best among poems I read in ph recently. Congrats Shiraz! *10*

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Andre Lopez 04 June 2008

a graceful poem! i like it

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Jing Jing 04 June 2008

in every star a beautiful sunflower, my favorite flower, nice poem

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~ Jon London ~ 03 June 2008

Persian my friend, you never fail to amaze...you open every-ones eyes to such beautiful things.....you're a great poet...'10' best wishes Jon

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3mvi 3mvi 02 June 2008

Great poem...this is defenetly one of your bests.

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Sadiqullah Khan 02 June 2008

the inner beauty, loves power, , , great lines

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Rani Turton 01 June 2008

Very elegant phrases and thoughts of an incredible finesse. Thanks Nightingale.

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Lynda Robson 31 May 2008

This is lovely, looks may fade but inner beauty stays, a well written piece, thanks. *10* Lynda xxx

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Thad Wilk 31 May 2008

Loves light shines bright from deep within, the inner beauty beneath the skin! *10*! ! ! Best regards, a great read! Friend Thad

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Viola Grey 31 May 2008

such a sweet small poem with such a huge message...fantastic

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S... Che 31 May 2008

its so sweet, very beautiful poem. In my favourites :) thank you for sharing

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You romantic, you! Perfectly composed and memorable. t x

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M M 31 May 2008

Radiance of the inner part can be felt and unveiled in every being. Your words showed it very beautifully for those who want to see. A very lovely poem.

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